Can you see what’s wrong with this sentence? Hint: it’s mainly about countables. The amount of people who came were amazing.
In fact, there are three problems: two outright errors and one point that’s open to debate.
Countables do count!
The first problem is with the word amount.
When we use ‘amount’ we refer to a quantity that’s undefined, even thought it can be described (large, small, unusual etc.) and we don’t usually consider its individual parts – if it has them.
We can’t talk about an amount of people, or of pencils, videos, or elephants. These words are ‘countables’. For things that can be ‘counted’ or considered individually, we use ‘a number of…’
Simple examples involving quantities are:
She found a large amount of mail on her desk
We used a small amount of sugar
Last month there was an unusual amount of support
Examples involving countables are:
She found a large number of bills on her desk
We used a number of grains of sugar in the experiment
Last month there was an unusual number of new supporters
We don’t need to know the exact number, but bills, grains and supporters are countable.
Now back to the example.
The amount of people who came were amazing.
In this case, amount is incorrect. The sentence should begin, of course, with:
The number of people ….
That’s the first problem fixed. But what about the second?
It’s about subject-verb agreement
The people aren’t amazing – well, they might be, but that’s not what the sentence says.
The number is amazing, and number is a singular noun, so the verb has to be singular too:
The number of people … was amazing
Now for the third problem…
The tricky bit
Should we say:
- The number of people who came was amazing, or
- The number of people that came was amazing
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For those who are still reading…
Should it be who or that? Either word is usually OK to use when referring to people, and there are different opinions about which is better. For ‘things’, it’s that (or which, but that’s a story for another day)
In this case, I believe there’s a slightly better argument for saying:
The number of people that came was amazing
The reason for the choice gets a bit complicated.
The word amazing is the key. The number that came is the most important idea in the sentence, and the reason for the amazement.
If we reduce the sentence to its basics, and still retain the main point, we would say:
The number that came was amazing
The extra words, of people, just give us more information, and are almost redundant.
Some might choose to use the word who:
The number of people who came was amazing
Even though the number is still amazing, this example puts the emphasis on the people who came, as opposed to those who stayed away.
And, surprise, surprise, I wouldn’t argue. A wider context might lead me to choose this option instead.
In reality, there’s a very fine distinction between the two.
The point of editing and correcting language, is always to analyse intended meaning, and consider sentences in their full context.
Happy (and tighter) writing!